What do you have to say about my poem? Honest Critique is needed!

Question

She was looking deep inside herself

she was looking for the texture

the taste of her soul

She was trying to find a maze

a way to get lost in her mind

what she found was a padded cell

and the color white

He was her lover

the reason she wanted

to be lost in the beginning

the reason she wanted to stay that way

His voice is what told her the commands

His voice was that of the devil's advocate

She danced with him in the pale moonlight

She let him hold her tight

He created the grey with in her mind

plant the seed to change wrong to right

Oh she had fallen in love with the wrong sort of man

This man was no man at all

He went by many names

but this is the tale of Insanity

He courted her with a simple rose

a few fancy tales

and what else

only God knows

She is nothing but a vegetable now

simply in love with Insanity

simply in love with the idea of being

crazy

its probably the only thing

that keeps her going in the world

Answer 1

Yeah, you're a pretty d**n good poet! But you already know this, don't you?

If you want this to be a masterpiece, and it can be, you can edit it, step back away from it awhile, look at it again as impartially as possible, and see where it flows perfectly and where it might not. You're a d**n good writer and probably could excel in any writing form. Just edit. And don't let your creative ego get in the way of fine-tuning your writing.  

Answer 2

That poem is awsome!! To be honest i really dont like poems but that one i couldnt stop reading. good job  

Answer 3

write in few words. Just like Haku in Japan or in sufi.

Answer 4

It's really deep, and it takes an unexpected twist towards the end... I love it!