What do you <span title="think???????????????????????????????????????">think????????????????????...</span>

Question

ok this is another song i made up

Them-

Its ok, to be sad

When you think of them

No need to worry

They don't deserve a person..good as you

Come on, come with ke

Chorus-

Come on, lets go have some fun, we don't need them and they don't need us, come on lets just go.

ok that is all i got tell me what u think?!?!?!

and the meaning of that song is about friendship or boyfriends or people you even have been married to, if you guys didn't work out or ended your realationship well then thats it if you guys want to you guys can work it out but just remember its ok to be sad but just go have fun sometimes they don't deserve a person good as you

Answer 1

hon, this doesn&#039;t say &#039; it&#039;s okay to be sad &#039; it says, s***w these people. you need to work on it some more, keep trying, don&#039;t trip on it so hard, just let the words flow, don&#039;t try to make it a certain type of music, lyrics are sometimes tougher than you think. But, hey, anything can work, so don&#039;t give up! If you want to learn to write, get into some English classes and writing classes, even check them out on line, that may help your thinking. words to songs should just come naturally to the writer.  Keep it up, we&#039;ll look for you in the charts one day!

Answer 2

it&#039;s okay, i guess.

idk, it would be easier to judge if you posted it finished...

Answer 3

haha very funny answer #1 i actually like to sew... i thought the song was pretty good ; ]

Answer 4

how about you start sewing instead?