What do you thank about this poem,,

Question

sister of mine,by judy hibbs,,,if i could be a child again,i know what i would see,,how much love thire was,, in all you did for me,,its not just now, but many years ago,,you gave me something,,my big ego,,i wish for you not money, but peace of mind, and a happy birthday sister of mine,,

Answer 1

It's a nice tribute to a sister.

It filled me with happy

memories of my

childhood.  I liked it.

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Answer 2

i think its good because it grabs interest as its not too long and its use of ryming and one whole stanza creates a good effect. also its using short yet detailed lines and it creates a beautiful poem with lots of feeling and depth...  

Answer 3

This poem is a joyous worded memorial of a wonderful sister. The only thing I would think to do is figure this poem into a better structure, and fix the spelling and punctuation errors.  

Answer 4

cute

Answer 5

It is nice besides the overuse of commas and the spelling of there as "thire."