What do you think? 2 poems?

Question

odd

graceful

wicked little finger

killing instinct

blow me away with your smile

painted lady

i got it all wrong

she peered in to my eyes

while sipping from my flask

while I chose wrong

cracked

why are these arms still shaking

legs still kicking

the air is out of this beast

it’s like being poisoned by a snake when it’s head is cut off

natures mockery

when its over its over

stop the record

stop the phone calls

these lies are starting to add up

the fractures wont heal if we keep moving the ribs

just sit still

let it go

exhale

i’m exhausted

Answer 1

Not that specific is hard to understand but u can improve not bad