What do you think? Is this a good poem?

Question

i have to cut away the string

that holds together our hearts

i have to get rid of the only thing

that keeps us from being apart

it isn't that i want him away

i wish he could remain with me

how i wish i could let him stay

but it simply cannot be

i tell myself its for the best

dont want to cause him more pain

dont want to cause more worry or stress

if i stay, i'll drive him insane

dont want to hurt him one more time

but its something i have to do

breaking his heart would be a crime

but staying would be one too

Answer 1

thats really good keep it up

Answer 2

that's really good. like amazing. like OH MY GOD!!!!! amazing. you're very talented.

Answer 3

good poem, feel bad for the guy, I think I might have been him a time or two.

Answer 4

well done, very nice and mature.

reminds me with Jane Eyre by Charlot Brontee, have u read it b4?

Answer 5

It's a beautiful poem and i think you could get that published...try it out

keep it up