What do you think? Puberty?

Question

Puberty

Trepidation,

A gunshot to the head

Pulling harder against the strings of the martyr

Death and the Healing

Sadness and love

Possessing everything, yet having nothing

Free yet Lost

Hope!

Like the early morning fog,

the sound of the wind whistling

Tales of time linger….

Coming through

like raindrops on a leaf

Flowers shrivel

Purging

Waiting for spring

Indeed She comes

The sun shines beautifully on

The only darkness is our shadow

Answer 1

very very good. make it tight:

Trepidation

gunshot to the head

etc etc etc----

death  healing

sadness  love

possessing everything  having nothing

freedom  lost

Hope,

the early morning fog

wind whistling

time lingers

coming through

raindrops on a leaf

flowers shrivel

purging waiting for spring

indeed

she comes

the sun shines beautifully on.

Only darkness is our shadow

Answer 2

great poem!

i expect to see it in a book one day (:

Answer 3

Well said.  Edit some non needed words would make this shine even brighter.

Answer 4

I love that it has a positive message at the end. Good work! :o)

Answer 5

A worth while message of warning, longing and hope.

well done, yet I wonder if a stronger title needed.