What do you think abou this Techno song I made???

Question

Ive tried once before but i think this ones better.. hwat do you think about it??? :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y8SiGTJuMLo

Answer 1

beats dont really mesh well together...

its okay tho.

i have heard worse.  

Answer 2

I think it sounds alright, but you should try mixing different other beats, and making it different, and unique, and represent something about yourself. Keep on trying to make beats, and someday you can probably be the next DJ tiesto.

- take it ez, and keep doing what you do best.