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What do you think about my poem? Could you please tell me?

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He whispers into my ear/ If I am your hero, then you are my heroine/ The most powerful I have ever seen./His words make me squirm/ My stomach is turning/ His words are sinking in my skin/ Like a tattoo or sin/If only he knew the truth/ The various lies he has been told by me/ I love you/ There is no other man/He kiss my neck/ He whispers in my ear/ That as long as I am around he has nothing to fear/Oh he is quite right/ I am a brand of heroine/ but not kind that rides with heroes/ I am the kind that drags you down/ gets its hold/ and never ever lets go/I am the kind that destroys life/ the sort that with one kiss/ you'll never want to leave/ I pulse through your veins/ I make you lose all fear/ I am the heroine and I am the villain

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  4. this is very good

    you may have a future in writiing
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