What do you think about my poem be honest please?

Question

The rain is falling on me

there's darkness all around

and deep inside i'm dying

everytime a raindrop hits the ground

but the rain thats pouring on me

isn't normal rain

the drops are filled with hatred

and the clouds they speak of pain

but the storm it isn't real

its all just in my brain

so no one else can see the clouds

and no one feels the rain

no one sees my sorrow

its hid behind my eyes

and no one knows the truth

of how i look upon a darkened sky

so I'm waiting for TOMORROW

cause its said TOMORROW brings the sun

but I've realized while I'm waiting

that TOMORROW NEVER truly COMES

and

YESTERDAY when I fell asleep

my heart was filled with pain

I told myself just wait till TOMORROW

but now TOMORROW is called TODAY

so the rain just keeps on coming

its driving me insane

the drops still say she hates me

and the clouds still see my pain

but everyone else is happy

where'd they find their sun?

I guess for everyone else

their TOMORROW always comes

but she was my TOMORROW

my one escape from pain

but now shes left and gone away

now forever it will rain

so I've accepted that I'm lonely

and flirt with my new friend death

and now my heart will welcome the pain

that I have within my chest

and through this all I've realized

that I'm the only one

that for ME and NO ONE else

TOMORROW NEVER COMES

Answer 1

I honestly truely liked it very nice

Answer 2

It made me sad but I liked it

Answer 3

Wow... One word... Wow

Answer 4

Not my cup of tea.

Answer 5

honestly, i think it sucks very much

Answer 6

I don't know,it certainly is very sad and dark.

Answer 7

VERY GOOD.....Not sure of punctuation but reading it ,I can tell it's from the heart.

Answer 8

That is awesome. I Love it. :D

Answer 9

very hardcore and deep; i like [:

Answer 10

wow that was very good

Answer 11

Well I'm not really into poetry, but it seems really good (I can understand it, it's easy to read and it conveys feeling), but it's sad and I don't like sad things so not sure how to feel about that. But all in all, I'm glad I read it (and I don't read much poetry), so as a poet, you should be happy about that, you reached someone who is difficult to reach (if I were a poet, that is what I would hope for).