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What do you think about my poem i wrote it's called *suicide*

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(Suicide)

Fighting

Bleeding

Screaming

wishing no one would see me

Pain

Blood Stains

Cutting the main Vein

I think im going insane

Depression

Sadness

unhappyness

this is what is causing my madness

Suicide

Last breath

this will be my long painful death

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  1. um....T_T


  2. get help

  3. wow...alot of emotions!! R u sure u ok?

  4. i think its too dark and depressing and not to be mean but completely honest..it just seems like someone who was pissed off so they wrote down some words on a paper

  5. Congratulations!!

    We all have our dark moments and some of us have our words to remember them

    Writing in the throes of depression is like a catharsis to the mind.

    It helps us move out of the darkness and into the light.

    Out of the deepest depressions flow some very wonderful pieces of work.


  6. its very nice....

  7. Glad your in a better place bro. It seemed like a good outlet to keep anything like this from happening. It is better to write it down than it is to actually do it. As far as the poem goes, I get it, but it is what it is. It was a way to keep you in check...It wasn't a love poem. It is not going to make you rich. But, It might have kept you here. Cool...

  8. It definitely connects with your emotions, and it also flows well. It's very good, as good as a poem about suicide can get :D

    Please read mine too :D

    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

  9. Its not really very good...

    Something like cutting the main vein

    doesn't really flow


  10. good for an edgar allen poe
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