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What do you think about my poem? its called paint it all...?

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As your are pinned,

with sadness and guilt

as watercolors are washed away

to give you a clean slate

As i am caught with a can of paint

im still seeing as a sinner

and you forget your not a saint

yours comes off so easly while

mine stay for an eternity

Im not a sinner nor a saint

but you find fault repeating my paint

you paint it on, but washes away in the morning fog

but my paint stays,hardens like a scar

not gettting past the paint,

because u forget your not a saint

i want to get paint thinner

be like you and be nor saint nor sinner.

let me be like you and erase my paint.

like i said im no sinner or saint

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  1. That is bloody brilliant. I love it. You really have a rare talent, wow!


  2. wow thats pretty deep i love it bravo id give you a 9....

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