What do you think about my poem.??

Question

An I Remember When

i know everyone's time comes.

the saying lifes to short is truer.

then people like to think.

its like just yesterday my life was filled with

friends gathered in my front yard,

playing silly little games like hide 'n go seek,

laughter could be heard from our street corner

love that you felt in your chest after your first kiss

& so much happiness

i took all those things for granted.

even thought they may seem small to others

they meant the world to me

now that its become the past

i wish i would have slown down

not rushed everything like i had.

i wish i would have took time

to enjoy the times i sent with those two

that i hold in my heart and miss dearly

we made a pact to be friends forever

life got in the way of our plan

but i no they still think of me

just as i still think of them

sometimes a wind breeze

or the smell of a new season will remind me

of those fun filled days i had with them

and ill think of the times we stayed out til 4

the times we played jokes on my grandfather

the long talks we shared

the truth n dares

there was never a dull moment with us was there

Death being so close like it is right now.

really makes you think

It makes you wanna slow everything down.

So you dont miss things as much when there gone.

just like everything else this to will soon become

Just a faded memory

the sadness will pass

fade out to just a story

of what had happened along time ago.

or An i remember when.

Answer 1

well the poem covers a lot of things..

it's nice..Ü

you just have to develop more on your vocabulary and check the words if they are the ones to be really used.

ex: So you dont miss things as much when there gone.

---> So you dont miss things as much when they're gone.

keep it up! Ü

Answer 2

That is a nice poem very deep, makes you sit back and think about what you have and if you really appreciate the people in your life and what they mean to you.

Answer 3

Very very nice poem. I really enjoyed reading it.

Good luck!

Answer 4

omg this is so much like my CH. this stuff is great!

if you like poetry and have good poems enter them in comps!

Answer 5

hey

thats a good poem.. touching..  

Answer 6

I'm more of a dr. sues fan. and i think i just slaughterd his name.