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What do you think about my religious poem?

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Wind don't blow out my fire

You might extinguish my soul

God please give me a path

I'm begging you

Don't close the gates to my heart

I'm a lonely singer

My love belongs to the world

Or else tomorrow I won't see my love

Without you who am I

Without your love life has no meaning

God please give me a path

I'm lost in this lonely world

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  1. Sounds like a pretty crappy relationship to me!


  2. That's beautiful, doll face!

  3. that is nice and sweet poem keep up the good work god bless you

  4. You Go Girl, Poetry is Awesome, Psalms is a book on it,LOl Keep it up girl. I love Poetry me and Emily Dickinson have Dec 10th as our B-Days and I think that is wierd, and we like as you do writing from our hearts.

    Jesus was Lonely and knows our pain. He was rejected by many and set to the cross. Our PATH to read the Word and Follow Jesus as he did we should. And look at the Bible meaning Below. God Bless I feel your thoughts.

  5. I hope your path will shine brightly for you from God's presence.  I have no doubt if you believe in God, the path will glow.  I wish I could answer your poem with one paved with inspiration, but I'm not good with poetry.  All I know is that if God gives you challenges or despair, he will see you through it.  Have courage, and always trust in God to help with any dilemma you have.  All in all, I think your poem is a wonderful pray asking for His help.

  6. Behold!

    My thoughts!

    Wait for it...

    "..."

    "Meh."
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