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I woke up startled to the tone of "Happy Birthday Ginny'. Hi i'm Ginevra Thompson. Yes Ginevra ( Ginny ) just like Ginny Wesley from Harry Potter. Well I have the perfect life, perfect family ( except for my 6 year old brother Georgie who I am not fond of ), perfect boyfriend, and of coarse the most perfect hair ever. I rolled over once and I got up. I put on my pink birthday dress and my pink high-heels. Also I brushed my light blond elbow length hair. I also put on my pink hair-band and I painted my nails and toes pink. " Bye mom, bye dad" I called as I raced downstairs. I gave then both a kiss and I ran out of the door to meet my best friend Julieette Andersons. "Hey Jay" I said as I walked up to her . " Hey Ginny" she said back. As usual Julieette gave me my birthday present , a usual charm for my charm bracelet. Julieette had one too, so on birthdays we always got eachother charms. Halfway to school I stopped to take my tiara out of my backpack and put if on. " Oh come on Ginny you look perfect." She said. "I do not ". I said. By that time we were already at shool. "Hey Ginny" called my boyfriend James. " Oh hi James'. I said casualy. " I got you something". He said. " Oh what is it what is it" ? I asked. He handed my a little box and when I opende it it was... A gold nacklast with an ingraved G on it. " Oh how did you afford this"? I asked. Well you know how i'm a swinsuit model." He asked. " Yes" I responded. " Well i've been promoted to Speedo Modeling." He said." Oh thats great I said. THE NEXT PART WILL COME OUT SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  1. its to unreal. I have the perfect life ever. I mean like what is up with that. Also your boyfriend is a swimsuit model. And why would you have a pink birthday dress. It's not like you are 4.


  2. i love it!!  

  3. Random... Needs spaces.... You don't need to mention Ginny Weasley... you should just mention her nickname is Ginny even though she is called Ginevra...

    You also have the name James... that's the name of a character from Harry Potter... you should change it people will think you are simply copying...

    Can I ask what the heck the plot is?

    You should make the speech better...we don't no what most of them look like, what they are wearing (clothes)...

    I found it boring and too quick. Sorry but try a different story.

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