What do you think about these sentences?

Question

Life is like chess

if you don't play, they say you don't know how to

But if you do, every one wants to beat you

The only people who hurt usare the dear ones we've always tryed not to hurt

Please4 tell me your opinion about each of them and tell me if their nice or make sense cuz their translated from another language

if you know better words to be used to get the meaning please tell me

and please tell me what is the name of a person who sells ice in English? if there's not an acual word just tell what to use when I want to write about this person

So, I can come back woth xome other nice sentences!

Answer 1

the first one is GREAT! is that a Persian saying?

the second is like an ENglish saying (which was a popular song in the 1940's

"You only hurt, the one you love"

Your version is good also

Iceman is an outdated term (with electricity) but people will know what you mean if you use it in a saying.  I want to hear that one!