What do you think about this article (it is an article that i wrote). Please rate in a scale 1-10.?

Question

Please tell me if they are any mistakes, grammar, or words that i can replace with.

Thank you for your time.

Ann Young

Wild Bird Refuge

By Valery Menelas

In the month of November, I started volunteering for Ann Young. To me it was like my first job. I didn’t have to volunteer, but I felt like I wanted to. Not many people volunteer at a place where they have to take care of birds. When I started I didn’t know anything about birds or why they are even on this earth. But now, I know a few facts about famous birds. The experience that made it difference from a job is that, when you finish volunteering, you don’t only feel that you made a difference into somebody’s life but you get out with knowledge. Knowledge of knowing what you been doing the past two or three months. As a member of the wild bird refuge, I had to clean cages, and do other household chores. This was no problem for me because I grew up doing most of the household chores around the house. From time to time I felt

Answer 1

I will rate 4. Reprhase some words and reorder your paragraphs. Its jumping. I mean mixed up.

Answer 2

did'nt finish it, must of run out of charecters, you use the volunteering word a few too many times in the first few sentences, post a link to the rest of it...

Answer 3

edit#'#

The experience that made it DIFFERENT from other jobs is that when you finish volunteering, you not only made a difference to someone's life but you are left with knowledge.

Answer 4

The experience that made it difference from a job is that, when you finish volunteering, you don’t only feel that you made a difference into somebody’s life but you get out with knowledge.  

Read this again and see if this sounds right?

Correct it using a "different" word.  

The ending isn't to good.  You are using house to much.

Answer 5

I would have an adult read it with you and correct any mistakes and to help it flow better.. It is too hard to edit something completely.