What do you think about this pic and its editing?

Question

I'm not a pro at editing but I need to post something on my site so I tried..Do you think it looks decent? or should I try again?

Pic of my cousin and I its for my online clothing store!

http://i252.photobucket.com/albums/hh18/mrsknatural/image1.jpg

Answer 1

good but it needs to "back up from veiw" like this......http://www.public.iastate.edu/~womenstu/...

Answer 2

It's decent but you need to take the quotation marks off the slogan - they do not belong there. And the girl in the green dress - what's hanging off her eye? It looks like she has fake eyelashes on one and and not the other.

Answer 3

beautiful !

Answer 4

awesome!