What do you think about this poem I wrote?

Question

This is a poem I wrote about this guy.....I'm not planning to give it to him.... but what do you think about it?

Name of poem: "I Can't Take It Anymore"

I can’t take it anymore,

The pain that weakens me with every breath

With every heartbreak that I get

The way I feel when you don’t speak to me

The thoughts about you that I think

The way I can’t get you out my mind, heart, or soul

The way I feel when you speak to them

The way you ignore me

The lies that you said

The words that were said, just lies…

“I love you”

I believed you

I can’t take it anymore,

I wish you would speak to me.

The way you speak to them.

The words you told her,

“hello” you said,

but not to me

I knew you forgot about me

I can’t take it anymore,

Just reassure

That those things were true

That you do love me

That you didn’t forget about me.

Say “hello” and make me feel safe

Because, I just, cant take it anymore

Answer 1

I like it, ive been there b4, felt that way b4. very good.

Answer 2

I gave you my heart

You broke it

Big deal # 1,505,392.

Please write something that hasn't been written badly a million and a half times.

Answer 3

Hahah EMOtional....nahh itz good.