What do you think about this poem............If i'm gone away?

Question

If i'm gone away

Body return become like dust

My soul flied in the air

I just see the sorrow day

If i'm gone away

Never cried for me

let me go forever

To my long sleep in peace

If i'm gone away

Smile for met your life

Shape all our dreams

To build all of your life

If i'm gone away

Into the silent land

Calm land provide a cover for body

My soul revert to my God

J---->10/07/08

that's it

thank you

Answer 1

its realy deep! its beautiful though. did you right it?

Answer 2

Some of the grammar seems off in parts, unless I am just not reading it right

Answer 3

do u wanna go? if yes, dont asking