What do you think about this poem (kinda dark)?

Question

In the sanctuary of my mind

only sounds the breath of the night

Whispering the sadness within my eyes

Reading my demons and my paths

the ones i buried beneath the lies

For only the one to exorcise this wrath

As my body lingers through the darkness

My soul howls the sorrow to the highest

And the litanies are softly sacrificed and singed

"And where's the ray of light among the shadows?..."

"the albatross to fly me to the Valhalla in wings of sins?..."

"the revival kiss in this infinite slumber guarded by crows?"

"the cross to exonerate the sinful son of the burden pins?"

"the angel to rape the mortgage of dead flesh and bones?"

Beneath the candle bed of starry gazing light

The only answer sent to the lost poet was the night

the ignorance build in the silence of the tide

"Know that the name of the angel is forbidden

A delusional never ending fight of unforgiven

Wisdom of the silence will never be the answer

for this question we deny an existent answer"

kinda weird,i know,but it just came through my mind..

Answer 1

It is definitely heavy. you do know God does forgive all

Answer 2

This shows real promise. Your use of internal rhyme and alliteration is very good. The subject is silly because it's not a real person. Put some of you in the next one.

Answer 3

some of your grammar is off, but i like it