What do you think about this resume?

Question

please help me "fix" my resume its for a retail career tell me how i can make som esmall but awsome changes to make it look awhole lot better

thnx

· I have excellent computer skills with Online task such as mailing,ordering, and other offline task such as Microsoft excel,Microsoft word, and also Microsoft outlook.

I carry myself with a bit of confidence to help others around me as well as helping myself. I learn and surpass my goals I set for myself in my job as well as in life.

· I am a very quick wited and a fast learner. I tend to learn faster then others in genreal. I love to help other people prosper in the knowledge that i have learned while workin in this retail career.

· I really do have a sence of satisfaction from helping customers with there questions and helping them resolve there needs in a fast but also a quality controled manner.

· In my previous job i worked in reatail stocking and rotating merchandise for the "back room" on to the retail shelf for further sale's.

· I also worked on the "sale floor" to help customers with any of there needs and wants makeing sure that they were fulfilled with the up most expectaions of satisfaction.

· I was also a cashier and learned the "database" and invoiceing from the computer and to the customers hand.

and of course i have all my private info on there also =]

Answer 1

You need to run this through a spell checker as there are a lot of errors.

All of the computer programs need to be capitalized (Microsoft Word, etc.).

Being quick witted has nothing to do with being a fast learner, and in some cases being quick witted is a bad thing.  I'd eliminate that all together.

A lot of these don't really have to do with your job tasks; your resume should list only the things that you did while you were employed, not about how great you are.  Save that for the cover letter and the interview.

Answer 2

your resume soudns very good but inorder for it to count as a real resume and not just a list of qualities lol.. you have to first have an:

objective:

Skills:

Education:

Work Experience:

Volunteer work:

Make sure you apply all those attributes and qualities that you listed about in your resume.. after its done it should look like this:

http://jobsearch.about.com/library/sampl...

good luck <333

Edit: after your done put in :  

"referenses available upon request"

if you already have all that and are just giving a summary for us then everything sounds great =)

Answer 3

I would be more than happy to construct a resume for your use.  The resume that you have provided in your question does not constitute a resume.

Since some personal information needs to be exchanged, please feel free to email me and we can work together to create a professional resume and cover letter to help you succeed in your job search.

I will need to know if you have access to Microsoft Word.  Just an FYI; I have written many resumes and cover letters for other individuals on Yahoo Answers who successfully obtained employment.  In addition, I do this line of work for a living.

I hope to hear back from you soon so that we can get started on your resume and cover letter.

Best wishes.

Answer 4

well first off all you need an outline. the way you have it now is just general information broken up. try going on yahoo hotjobs and make a resume on there. or you can research proper formats for resumes. you need an objective, education, work history, contact list, and other such categories. try not to use "i" or "me".  

Answer 5

to many I 's in there it gets boring and repetitive.  I used this resume writing service in my area, this is the email address, ([e-mail]) you should try them, it only cost me $35.00 and I got a great job from this new resume, I never thought about the format that they use but the turn around time was less then 24 hrs.  I would have to say it was the best service I have ever used and it was worth every dime.  Also they let me pay through paypal.