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What do you think about this sad poem?

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Watch as these tears falls into empty space

See it fall into life's nameless place

Can you see the sparkle as it catches the light

That sparkle once was happiness that is no longer in sight

As it falls watch it, its color has changed

From blue to bright red, it has a wide range

There it goes all alone, it continues to fall

With it, it takes the emotion, the emotion of all

Wait, can you hear it? A sob has broke free

Has shook the lungs cold, but yet it continues to be

Here it comes, a force has been built between the eye

A wall of shear water, it's now time to cry

A shudder, a scream, darkness envelops your soul

The darkness of the night has taken its toll

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  1. really moving.


  2. i like it

  3. noobish poem

  4. I think that some people try to find meaning in meaningless things.

  5. wow  hot * i send you a squeeze

      and watch they don't pluck you *

    you remind me of the fio truck *

    AAAIII you roasted me *

  6. "...The darkness of the night has taken its toll..."

    ...what was is reclaimed again...a beautiful melancholy sadness of one's lifetime...the truth is only enhanced...

    ...thanks for sharing...

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