okay.. i had to write a story as an english assignment. what do you think bout it. proofread if you want, critisize if you must
idc just what do you think
Deep, deep, in the deepest part of the south, lived two boys Lucan and Daygon. Lucan and Daygon have been friends since kindergarten when Daygon gave Lucan a cookie. The boys grew up together, but Lucan always picked on Daygon because he was only fourteen and Lucan was fifteen. Secretly Daygon is three inches taller than Lucan, but Daygon is to sweet-hearted to rub it in Lucan’s face. Despite Lucan picking on Daygon, Lucan cares a lot about Daygon and protects him like a brother.
Well the story goes on. The boys were riding around on their four wheelers, like they do every day with Lucan’s dog Eugene, when they heard someone yelling in a distance. Lucan is the adventurous one of the two so of course he wanted to go check it out. Daygon on the other hand is more cautious of what his actions are, but he too was curious. The two boys rode over to the noise quietly, and as they got closer the yelling got louder and louder. Daygon could tell by the pitch of the voice that it was a woman yelling.
The two boys got off of their four wheelers and crept behind a large bush to see what the fuss was about. They saw a picnic blanket and basket with a bottle of wine, which appeared to be red wine from the color in the glasses. There also saw a silver Volvo parked a little distance away. The main thing the boys noticed was there was a man and women.
The man was tall, 6’1 at least. He had brown hair and green eyes. He seemed frustrated by the look on his face. He wore casual clothes, a pair of jeans and a button down dress shirt. The woman had long, blonde hair that was convoluted with curls. She had baby blue eyes and she looked about twenty-four as the man did also. She looked furious, her cheeks were fire red. Her anger was quickly profuse. If you looked pass her anger she was a very beautiful woman. She wore a knee length yellow summer dress with white flats and she had a diamond ring on her left hand. It was obvious that the woman was very very angry at the man.
Out of nowhere the woman pulls out a gun and shot the man. The man fell to his knees and gave his wife a look so shocking it was hard to bare. At the sound of the gunshot, Eugene went crazy and started to bark. Within seconds the woman swung her head over to the left and noticed that the boys were there. The woman gave them an evil bloodlust stare.
On instinct the boys ran to their four-wheelers and started them up. Lucan’s four-wheeler wouldn’t start, no matter how hard he kicked it. Daygon told Lucan to get on his four-wheeler and there were out of the woods, into Daygon’s house within minutes. They locked all the doors even the deadbolts. The boys were so petrified neither of them moved or spoke. Eventually Lucan broke the silence and said, “Did that really just happen.†Daygon quietly, almost to quiet to hear said, “Yeah.â€Â
The boys decided not to say anything to ANYONE. They even did a blood oath to promise they never would. A couple of months went by and they didn’t hear anything about a missing person or body found or anything. Well one day the boys were just getting off of school and they went to a little convenience store down their street. They went in and got a couple of snacks. Lucan noticed the Snickers were out, so he improvised and got a Milky Way instead. On their way out of the store they saw the same silver Volvo. Daygon nudged Lucan to show him with his eyes the car. Then both boys where looking at the car the passenger seat window rolled down. The same woman with blonde hair looked fiercely with a half evil looking smile. She grinned and winked at the boys and drove away.
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