What do you think in this poem?

Question

baby you capture me in your eyes

in place where i belong

in beautiful place where your love is all i need

you just capture me in your eyes

when i see you look at me and smile i know you are the one for me

you capture me with your smile

you are the only one i ever wanted in my life

causes baby you always make me smile

you capture me with your smile

you capture me in your eyes

you capture me .....you capture me

Answer 1

Thats great! keep it up. I agree i think it seems like a lyrical poem.

Answer 2

As a lot of poetry does... they really sound like they could be great song lyrics!!

They've got a lotta ryhthm.  

Answer 3

I like it.

Sounds like the lyrics to a song :)

No, but I really like it.

If its yours well done ;)

Answer 4

This seems more of a song than a poem. Consider adding ''baby'' at the beginning of each sentance to make it seem more of a poem in your case. Forget the last sentance when you repeat ''you capture me'' as it sounds silly and more of a love song.