What do you think its a bit rough and yes its my current life?

Question

please no harsh comments

? Can It Be You?

The first time I saw you I just thought you were really cute.

But as I hung around you I liked you more and more...

If you could only get a chance to know me you would see how unique I really am.

That one chance I got to talk to you I was to shy to talk to you and I blew it. =[

You have a girlfriend but I’ll wait for you because this here…me can’t stop thinking about you that’s some sort of sign that I’m liking the right person.

And the first time I got to see your smile I fell in love.

Can it be love at first sight?

Every time I think about you my heart skips a b_ea_t.

Daniel I’m sitting here writing this down as I am so distracted by the picture of your smile in my head.

I know that day you saw something in me.

I just want you to give me a chance to love and care about you.

As on the 23 of August 2008 I saw you not just from the outside but I saw a little bit of who you really are, as I looked into your eyes

I’m not going to ruin your relationship just to be with you.

Maybe you didn’t see anything in me but I would think so because every time I would walk here or there I saw your head turn my way.

But all I tried to do at that party was figure some way for you to notice me…

I just want to show you me!

But I’m probably just invisible to you.

I haven’t felt like this in a long time actually i've never really felt like this at all.

Can it be you?

Can you be the guy I fall in love with at first sight?

Wishing to be A+D foreve_

24 August 2008

By: AnDr3a MoReNo ToRr3s

Answer 1

Righteous! It's hard t o say more without being "harsh," which you asked us not to be.

Answer 2

i like this, its interesting and a cool perspective.

nice :)

Answer 3

i really like it =]