What do you think o my Peom?

Question

Bermuda yahoo,

Is this place?

Post disappear,

Without a trace,

Lost within a vortex,

Left here on my own,

7 hours missing,

Where did it go?

Where is everybody,

I do not know,

Maybe gone to mars,

I believe so,

Come back to me,

My cyber friends,

We’ll keep writing poetry,

Until the end.

I've noticed that yahoo's poetry page has not changed since 1PM AET it's now 7 minutes to 9PM. And everytime I post something I can't find it nor, my contacts. Weird and wacky yahoo is today.

Answer 1

You done well with this.  You might want to drop "poetry" on the second to last line, not needed and flow.  Good one.

Answer 2

aww how sweet, you missed us!

Good job with this poem!

It should be on the Y!A homepage . Since (I`m guessing) thousands were feeling this way today, and you expressed it poetically.

lol it`s cute. I read it 3 times.

PS Galactia we weren`t in Mars we were floating in Cyber Space.

Answer 3

Awesome girl.... that's really good !!!

Wacky yahoo at it's best this morning... 7 hours and counting!!

Answer 4

Excellent poetry!  You've captured my frustrations as well as a lot of others as well.  I put up two new poems today, and they may as well be hiden -- or perhaps they are!

Few readers.  I wish they would fix their "upgrade" so it would work.

I'm glad I caught this poem.

T.

Answer 5

if this does not win a nobel prize for literature, then there will likely be riots in all the major world capitals!