What do you think of my 1st website? please can i have tips and suggestions?????

Question

This is the 1st time I have done this and I am fairly happy with it but I would really like to hear some objective opinions. It would be great if anyone could give hints or tips?

www.kudos2u.info

Answer 1

I think it looks very professional.  Don't listen to envious losers.

Answer 2

hey :) it looks pretty cool, just maybe get the pictures of the models to be a bit clearer as theyr a bit fuzzy and that would really be all :)

its good for a 1st time!!

Answer 3

The look is fine.  Now you must get traffic to your site.  First, think up every possible search term that people would use to find you from specific to general.  Then re-write your content to include those words so that the search engines like Yahoo and Google find them and rank you high up in searches.  If you want to speed things along get people to link to your website.  In bound links are what Google likes best.

Answer 4

amateur

Answer 5

It is quite bad in places. The pictures you have are grainy and look unprofessional for a start. Some of the models look cheap but only because  the posing, clothes and make-up is overdone.

The wording could do with some help too, perhaps giving too much information when it's not really required, you need to get people contacting you to ask questions and drive people to the website by using more useful keywords drafted into a little description.

You don't really need to have bodies and chests on the pictures, you need to focus the lens more on the hair itself and the staff don't look overly attractive in black and white, you need to emphasise their lovely smiles and infuse some colour.

I would use the about us page for your home page, it's much better.

I love the colour scheme and the concept and the fact that you are continually adding content TBC, that should arouse interest and also allow you to tweak the rest at your leisure.

Not bad for a 1st attempt though, keep at it and you'll end up with perfection eventually.