What do you think of my Inspirational poem Acrostic?

Question

Please criteque.... Spelling is done through check spelling in Australian english. : )

Illuminating sun, shine and be free,

Noble and magnanimous qualities,

Spiritual goals, strives to achieve,

Passion drives the inspired to -

Endeavor to achieve their dreams,

Righteously with no ill intent,

Acquiring skills to succeed,

Transition made from shredding skins,

Inspires the ocean to flow into springs,

Overcome the serpent beasts,

Never let your foes strike your feet,

Allow them to be your strength,

Loving each other until the end.

Pride in ones beliefs,

Open mind captures knowledge,

Every artist was an amateur,

Molding sculptures from clay.

Cheers:

Answer 1

Great job.  Watch your spelling.

Answer 2

I think I'll hang this one on the wall to read when things get hectic...

Answer 3

nice, heres to inspiration "cheers"

Answer 4

You have such a full and pure spirit. Some people don't like optimism. I'm for it. TD

Answer 5

Why do you misspell "Inspirational" in your inspirational poem?

Answer 6

I like this a lot, great job...it is very inspirational!

Answer 7

i lyk the 1st bit. but the POEM bit is a bit different to the first bit.

but i lyk it ^.^