Ok so i started this a while ago and i only have two paragraphs but i don't wanna move on if the beginning is not good. Here it is:
"It is the dawn of a new day, where once again darkness encases the earth. The ground beneath my feet has been dampened by the merciless torrent that has pelted this land for days. Giving us all a sign of despair. The once before flourishing flowers are now drowning into nothing. My homeland is dieing away into a cold, murky, and flooded mess. And I am left to look down upon it and watch it happen, with no way to stop it. It’s painful, almost as painful as the loss of both my parents, nine years ago. The unending darkness pulls upon us a bone chilling draft. I look down at my home from the sky, for just one last glance, as I proceed into the realm of the lost. No… I am not dead, like those I am visiting. Except I will never be like them; I am genetically altered such as to make me more superior than any other human alive. You can say that I have special powers, but they are more like abilities I have been given. I am sure most humans would like the ability to morph into a wolf or have complete control over fire, but with these abilities comes responsibility. Which is where I am headed, to answer my calling.
The doors to the spirit world can be brutal to pass through if you are not yet a spirit. But as soon as you enter all welcomes you, especially when you are one of the renowned protectors, which I have become over my very few years of life. After witnessing my parents’ death from a tree at age five I was taken away by a man who became like a father to me. He was another protector, really if it were not for him I would not have these abilities. He gave them to me right before he took his last breath. So I guess you can say that I am an orphan, but I can fend for myself."
Please tell me what you think... thanks
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