What do you think of my TRIGEE Poem?

Question

TRIGEE: The Trigee is a three-in-one poem. They are built by combining two short poems into a third large one by stringing the lines together. The left stanza is read first, the right stanza second, then the combined lines make the third poem.

Again, there are no rhyme and meter requirements.

Shattered glass and curdled milk………… Through winds of faith, and burning flames,

Lye baked upon my heart………………….Of passion igniting kindled flame,

From winter’s blue, no cherubs sing………Awaiting for her prince charming,

No Rosie song for me, to sing………………To embrace her through the inner springs.

Answer 1

Very nice trigee. (The trolls are out and about)

Answer 2

its very good-it came together nicely

Answer 3

Thanks for refreshing my memory of trigee. The one you have written seems especially difficult. The wording, the thoughts, the totality of the whole. Good work. I'm convinced it takes bravery to challenge poetry such as this and especially display for critique. Today, you encourage me to reach higher.

Answer 4

Excellent,  you give me the courage to try to write one of these.

Answer 5

A rhyming Trigee is very difficult to do. This is another success.

Answer 6

A very well done Trigee!

Answer 7

I love it!  Great work.

Answer 8

This is excellent! Better than many of mine.

Answer 9

This one got deleted while I was answering it earlier, I hope I ain't jinxing it.

It is actually a very good trigee.