What do you think of my Trigee

Question

Kindled flame burns……………………….Within ones castle,

Creating inspirations………………………Men become soldiers,

Desire to strive……………………………. Protecting its country,

Dreams made reality………………………They are honoured.

Answer 1

I like.  Nice use of metaphors with flame and castle.  

Answer 2

This one goes in the book.

Answer 3

I think it's fantastic!

Very cool...

Answer 4

I am not a poet,  but know what I like to read.

Loved it!

Thanks for sharing.

God bless! <><

Answer 5

Honestly, it's one of the most amazing trigees my eyes have have ever fed to my brain!

Answer 6

lol call me ignorant, never heard of Trigee before, but I like it. Have not studied poetry to any great extent, but very nice.

Answer 7

Nice job !!!,,,, It speaks a lot of truth ,,,I lked it & another writing well done,,,,,,,,

Answer 8

What TD said...

Answer 9

Wow, you really inspired me to write one.  I can't believe how difficult they are!  A glass of champagne to Galactia!