What do you think of my first Monoryme Poem? Cheers : )?

Question

As I sit on my leather recliner chair,

Quietly play a little game of Solitaire,

I appeared out my window to see a grizzly bear,

As my next door neighbour Rodney was quite unaware,

While he was sitting by his garden in his underwear,

Eyes closed on the ground, saying his, daily Morning Prayer,

That he was being chased by a grizzly bear,

I yelled out of the window, “Hey Rodney beware,-

As you’re currently been chased by - an Alaskan bear,

Rodney took off down the road of the street of Times Square.

All the people down the road had stoped and stare,

Watching poor Rodney get chased, by a big brown scary bear,

Wearing nothing else but his underwear,

As he ran pass the guards and the countries Lord Mayor,

Who thought Rodney was doing nothing but being a Lair?

They took Rodney under arrest which, wasn’t quite fair,

Poor Rodney now horrified was, now in despair,

“I’ve been chased by an Alaskan big brown bear I declare,”

Which, the guards and the mayor got quite a scare,

Realizing, Rodney wasn’t tiring to be a lair.

That infect he was being chased by a big brown hairy bear,

So the mayor told the guards “let him go it’s only fair,”

“Poor guy’s been chased by a big brown hairy bear,”

“Guards get your 32 and shoot the regeared bear,”

“It’s I who has stated and I declare,” said the mayor,

“No, don’t it’s me, it’s your little cousin Zahyr,”

“I had done this for a show premier,”

“That comprises of me to do a little dare,”

“As a prank to a friend to give a little scare,”

“Now the job is done we’re both a millionaire.”

Answer 1

A worth while fright, Huh?

Answer 2

Very cute and funny story in poetic form.

Answer 3

yeah

It's a goodie!

Answer 4

I declare I barely know how to comment my dear!!!   Pretty good! Whew that couldn't have been easy!!  Cheers!!

Answer 5

The comedy and irony in this short fiction makes it a winner! This sounds like a Dr. Seuss story. This belongs in a children`s book!

Great Job! I love it and so will my kids!

I will be reading this to my children at bedtime!