What do you think of my love poem, and rate it from 1-10?

Question

Until I Met You (maybe needs a better title?)

No more than just a broken heart ago

I made a promise to myself never to trust someone again

Judging from my rough and rocky past

I wrote off love as just a game a fool will play and never win

And I felt certain I was right

Until I turned a corner in the night

And there I saw you

Like an angel you just suddenly appeared

Sent to me with a love so true

That it could make up for the lies and wasted years

Now I see there were other loves I could’ve knew

Until I met you

I've heard the words "I love you" said in vain so many times

I quit believing that someone would really care

And after one too many dead end roads

I found myself stumbling through the dark down to my last prayer

I didn't know what else to do

Until I met you

Answer 1

4

Nothing about it grabs me and pulls me in, i'm just reading medicore typical love sappy lines here.

Answer 2

9/10

Aww, it's really cute.  But don't change the title, because it keeps things nice and simple.

Answer 3

9-10!! its really goood!

Answer 4

7/8 it is super good :)

Answer 5

aaaaaaaaw, thats AWESOME!!! 10.

Answer 6

i dont really like poetry that much,

but this is super good!

7-8

Answer 7

It's deep. And simply awesomn. A girl would love that...

9, because of the missing puntuation marks...(sorry, its my OCD lol)

10 for the poem itself!

=)

Answer 8

Call it "TheDarkSide"

Answer 9

Change "trust someone" to "trust anyone" and "could've to "Could have". Take out  the last line in the first stanza, and have it read "Until I met you" and change "And there I saw you" to read "It was then I saw you".

The title is fine. Different wording could bring the lines to a similar length.

For the story you tell 10/10

As a poem 6/10

"No more than just a broken heart ago" I liked that very much

for that alone 10/10

Robert

Answer 10

i think its brilliant, it could use a little on the words, so that they fit better, like "i could've knew" should be "i could've known" but overall it has some potential! nice job!