What do you think of my love poem?! please rate =] and comment?

Question

I want to get to know you like..

the way you move when you dance to a music

the number of sips you take to drink your latte

the seasoning you used for your lunch today

or how fast you drive when your mad

what joke makes you laugh

or what you draw when your bored in class

i want to get to know you like

how many stars you want in the sky

what pillow makes you sleep better at night

How loud you have to shout when you have to fight

the number to tissues you need when you have to cry

I want to get to know you like this tonight

Thank you please tell me what you think and if there is ways to improve it =] Thanks

Answer 1

i like the idea behind the poem, but the poem itself makes you sound like a stalker, you should check out some poerty sites and read as much poerty as you can. 3/10.

Answer 2

I want to get to know you like

I would say

I want to get to know you ( for example)

The way you move when dancing to muic

what do you like to drink

what you eat for lunch

your mood when driving

What makes you laugh, cry

I just want to get acquainted with you.

I would start slowly

Answer 3

i don't think u have to improve it....... i like it just the way it is.........