What do you think of my new Trigee Poem. Cheers : )?

Question

TRIGEE: The Trigee is a three-in-one poem. They are built by combining two short poems into a third large one by stringing the lines together. The left stanza is read first, the right stanza second, then the combined lines make the third poem.

Again, there are no rhyme and meter requirements.

Your eyes so hypnotising………………..Mind travels unforseen Landscapes,

Like the sun it radiates…………………..Horizons never peered,

decorative buttons glisten…………….....Within a new dimension,

fingers dance, upon your keys…………..Captivate as well, intrigue.

These two versers came from my previous poem (The Office Friend).

Here is a link to view poem.

http://au.answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Al.hVxI7xfkDMRHXDKqdAzrg5gt.;_ylv=3?qid=20080719215709AA7iE5R

Thankyou

Cheers : )

Answer 1

Your'e really, really good at this form! So what are you talking about? Perhaps aTV?

Answer 2

very good:)

Answer 3

Very pretty and descriptive, yes I like it! Glad to see you put your verses from your The Office Friend -- Good job!!

Been working on a couple of different forms of poetry myself--which not yet fully edited yet!  Posted a new poem earlier!

Keep up the good work, have you been successful with publishing yet? It will come!!

Cheers!!