What do you think of my new poem? " The star and the dirt"?

Question

I til my head down wearing a frown

I take a notice of all the dirty dirt on the ground

Their stomped on by a million footsteps every single day

"But who cares its so dirty anyways"

Worthless that those thoughts wouldnt even be made

But the reason we can step on them is because of its strength

that each pebble are close together making up its strength

Then i til my head up right at the sky

beautiful stars representing the night

everybody wants to be up high, pretty and bright

But why? Why are each star scattered away from their kind?

i dont see two stars with each other

or three or four spending this beautiful night together

Rather, it seems like they dont want to be bothered by others

Do i want to be the beautiful star so lonley

Or would i want to be the dirt with love to hold me

But i do know the night alone is boring..

Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 1

Amazing, I really enjoyed reading it. Good job! :)

Answer 2

that's AmAzInG...........

g0oD j0b...............

Answer 3

I liked the choice you made me think about. It wasn't bad.

Answer 4

It is nice.