What do you think of my poem? It's really short.?

Question

Well, I'm not sure.

Just a short poem because I felt like writing. :]

What do you think?

Thanks.

A Beauty behind the lyrical mind;

Only once you turn to say goodbye;

So die for one last scene, one last sight;

And your ghost carry through this blackened, murderous night.

Goodbye.

It was short. :D

Answer 1

Great ... it sure did give me the chills though

           AHHHHH AHHHH !!!!!!!!

Answer 2

Short poem--short answer:COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

Answer 3

it didnt particularly grab me, sorry poetry is so flaky

Answer 4

G R E E A A T T !!! [x

Answer 5

Short, but nice :) i liked the ghost part :)

You are talented :)

Answer 6

I really like it. I don't think it is a "masterpiece" but I am glad that someone was able to produce something that made me slow down and think.

I give it Five Stars because you did it.  

Thanks

Answer 7

i like it a lot! whats it about?

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