What do you think of my poem. Please comment?

Question

A Space Creature

The night is like a cut

A cut of my strings

In the great puppet art

Of my dreams

I stumble around in a daze

A daze in my clumsy haze

My limbs again

My wooden dreams

Of these great puppet arts

I am a deformed muppet

A snipped string clings to my arm

It is still

Like the night

Cold in the age of space flight

Answer 1

Im not really into poetry...but that was a really nice poem! I could actually picture it in my mind! its nice!

Answer 2

a good one

Answer 3

Lovely, it had personality, which is great in writing. It was rather quirky and like a love-able nerd ;].  I enjoyed it. Your really painted a picture with your words. And it has a voice which is great in writing.

Keep on writing.

Answer 4

what is going on here !!

Answer 5

quirky but lovely!

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