What do you think of my poem and what do you think it means?

Question

I just wrote it tonight in about five minutes; it sort of just came to me. What do you think? Thanks.

The day it returned no bird sang

No flower opened more than the sun allowed nor

Did ravens turn to gold.

The day it returned no desolate house was re-

Inhabited

Nor burnt cities de-carbonized back to their

Roots of brick and mortar

The day it returned was so devastatingly

Unexpected

All that could happen that day

Was to look upon the apparition

That transfigured into substance

And bask in its radiance

Give praise to its radiance

For the day it returned

Signaled that the day after

All these things would follow.

Answer 1

it is absolutely genius man. Hard to believe you came up with it on your own. You have talent.

Answer 2

that is totally awesome, so much better than i could do. i'm jealous of yer sweet writing skillz!!

Answer 3

Oh my god!I cannot believe it.I am sure you know what I am going to say.