What do you think of my poem called "True Love"?

Question

True Love

The pain

Is never ending

Like water flowing

Throughout the world

It kills you slowly

Little by little

Day by day

Until that one comes to save you

And you save them, too

From that movement on you know

They are the one for you

Your soul mate, best friend

The apple of my eye

The love of your life

Answer 1

i like it, when two people come together and they help each other then it grows from friendship into a very strong love, into falling in love and soul mates for life, because what you shared together cannot be replaced and was given out of pure love, and that's the best!!

Friends, lovers & soul mates, for forever & a day, there isn't anything you would not do for this love!♥

Answer 2

Try making it all rhyme. Put a little more time into it, but I like most of it.

Answer 3

  I think it's quite awesome and great as you did a good job with the subject as it falls from your heart.