What do you think of my poem...i want honesty only?

Question

Title: BREAKING POINT!

Coming from one hundred degrees,

Down to the breaking point below zero.

The life at one hundred degrees

Fasinating,

Controlled,

Surprises.

Until going to the breaking point,

Sadness,

Stressed,

Pressured.

The breaking point is killing

Being killed and still alive, it's difficult,

Everyone you're suppose to love, has killed you

Shot you,

Murdered you,

Smuggled you,

Who's to turn to at the breaking point?

Answer 1

Wow I actually love it, REALLY. Its really good. Good job. The only thing that kind of botherd me was ur title. Um u should just leave it like "The Breaking Point". But if u want u can leave it like that. But overall its pretty good.