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What do you think of my poem? (its edited)?

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Ancient men with great skill wrought

as fame and glory were what they sought

They carefully hammered and skillfully forged

Weapons with which they fiercely fought

the king's sword was rightly made

a lordly and a knightly blade

foes will find its sight unkind

thus it's name will never fade

it slashed at mail, it pierced scale

it shone bright while foes went pale

it was fierce, it craved to pierce

once upon swords, it shattered them frail

And so the king rode to war

In lands unknown and realms far

To places dark where wild men bark

where the skies have no moon and star

once the day of battle came

man knew not face nor name

he knew only how to fight

both for glory and for fame

Horns blew as swords glowed bright

arrows flew and their shadows blocked light

the field became a dwelling for death

as grim dark birds were rounding their flight

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  1. 3rd stanza was redundant but otherwise, GREAT


  2. It was written very well, but i don't get what its about.

    but maybe thats the beauty of it that you have to interpret it yourself.

    very good overall

  3. "Hi!"

    As per always loved it. : )

  4. Really really great!!! You're the only one who made it? When I started making poems about trees It was too short. This one is very long! Nice work!

  5. nice poem good job

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