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What do you think of my poem? (its more editings)?

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Ancient men with great skill wrought

as fame and glory were what they sought

They carefully hammered and skillfully forged

Weapons with which they fiercely fought

the king's sword was rightly made

a lordly and a knightly blade

foes will find its sight unkind

thus it's name will never fade

it slashed at mail, it pierced scale

it shone bright while foes went pale

it was fierce, it craved to pierce

once upon swords, it shattered them frail

And so the king rode to war

In lands unknown and realms far

To places dark where wild men bark

where the skies have no moon and star

once the day of battle came

man knew not face nor name

he knew only how to fight

both for glory and for fame

Horns blew and the men cried

While they marched forth, side by side

The first lines clashed and men engaged

As they began with strength and pride

the field became a dwelling for death

as smoke and dust took away breath

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  1. omg. its soo creative. its very rymy too.        :-)


  2. sorry but i still fail to see the point of the 3rd stanza, i really do love the idea though.

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