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What do you think of my poem? ?

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It is titled 'Alas, she was too late..' and was written by me, Ruby, aged fourteen.

She dreads the moment,

That he comes home,

She's by herself,

She's all alone,

She washes her face,

After another fight,

This tunnel's getting darker,

She see's no light,

She loves him,

Yet fears him,

She hates him,

And sometimes feels strong,

Though, alas, the day,

She was to get help,

He hit her and she cried,

with one last yelp,

She lays quite still,

She's finally at peace,

She'd longed for this day,

When her crying would cease

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  1. i love it!!!!

    it is sooo pretty and sad at the same time!!!!

    you really have talent!!!

    :]


  2. It's good but eat some choco choco chip cookies!!!

  3. Thats a good poem for your age.. h**l, i am 25 and cant even think of something that good...  :)  good job and keep up the good work.  

    Its sad, but i like sad poems , because they are real, also.

    i can write good love poems to my boyfriend, but thats it.. and thats because i love him.

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