What do you think of my poem???

Question

I'm tired of waisting

This dream is so much more

Don't lay back

Try to walk through that door

Fear of flying

Is in my veins

Music isn't something

Its everything

Guide my heart

To this belief

Forget the past

Failure will no longer be

Just take the risk

Forget the breaks

Nows my time

To fill this lake

Answer 1

Ooh la la

How wonderful girl!

I really suck at writing stuff so it's really good to know that other people have that gift

(:

Answer 2

since I write poems and have a journal myself, I would have to say this is very good

Answer 3

Ooooooooh

very nice.. I loved it!

ON a scale of 1-10 (10 being the best) I'd give it an 8!

Answer 4

Pretty d**n good! =)