What do you think of my poem??

Question

you know those dreams

they go to the extremes

they just dont make sense

they leave you in suspense

why do they come like this

they make you reminisce

the messages are subliminal

criminals are noncriminal

i try and clear my mind

get loose and unwind

i wish i could forget

must live without regret

no matter how hard i try

the dreams come and i dont know why

but i guess ill soon find out

sit back without doubt

the answer is comeing

its soo numbing

the answer is here

what is this fear

hope you liked it

its a poem about the dreams i was haveing after my step dad passed away from an asthma attack

R.I.P Daren

Answer 1

Although a spontanious honest piece, it is well revised and rhymed. I feel that the words were coming from your core, the core u have never seen in yourself. What assured this idea is that this poem is related to a real incident in your life. I see the light after the dark and the victory after the battle. This poem expresses a promising vision i guess.  

Answer 2

That's great work! Its well thought out, makes since, and rhymes. You and your family are in my prayers. =)

Answer 3

                 Destination

Once you have to go there

and i am also not spared

again will come back once

but  cant meet

Life and death

you cant be spared