What do you think of my poem?

Question

"Let Go"

I'm tired of being the one to keep it together.

Why Can't I scream too?

Instead I sit here quietly.

My own body is my prison.

Being quiet and nice can be a burden.

I want to let go of everything I'm juggling,

but I can't I'm afraid to disappoint.

I started this on 6/9/08 and finally finished it on 7/10/08. My mind went blank for a while after the first line. lol :) Please tell me what you think. Thanks to all who answer. :)

Answer 1

I LOVE THIS! thank you for writing it..i can definitley relate to it and i think its an amazing work of art. :)

Answer 2

That is really deep and I love it! It was definately worth spending time on. The metaphors really mean something. VERY GOOD!

Answer 3

Hi Amber!

Wow!! That is very good!! So short, simple, and to the point!!! I love all of your poems and drawings!!

Dani