Ok well I wrote this is under 10 minutes but I did because I found it is a great way to vent my feelings. All the emotions are true and genuine. But since this is my first one I'd like some help. Here it goes...
V.1 I cry, my eyes too wet to see,
It's all a blur it seems to me.
My tears forgotten, like a dream.
I cry while holding back my scream.
V.2 It's all your fault, let me explain.
Your lies have caused me too much pain.
I'd yell in your face if I could.
But I guess I'm misunderstood.
V.3 I loved you once and I'll still try.
I'll make it clear, you cannot lie.
Because of you and only you,
My hopes ahead reduce to few.
V.4 I cry my eyes still wet to see,
Look at what you have done to me.
My tears reliving, like a scream.
I cry, forgotten, like my dream
Rememb'ring who I wanted to be,
But Forgetting who I am.
Because of you.
And the Chorus is:
I remember who I wanted to be.
But I'm forgetting who I really am.
I remember what I wanted to see.
But I'm lost and I don't give a ****.
* The chorus goes between each of the verses by the way. I just didn't want to write it over and over. Thanks for reading it! Now can you help me and what do you think of my first song? Thanks.
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