What do you think of my poetic line?

Question

A butterfly rest on a flower, drinks its nectar, but who is stonger?

Answer 1

That actually makes sense to me. And I believe it to be a very good line.

Hehe, I was going to comment about the "rests" thing as well, but that was before I noticed you changed/fixed it.

But all in all, very nice. That would fit decently into a short poem.

Answer 2

I think it's pretty deep to those who understand what you mean..

but if they have no idea what you're talking about... it will seem silly.

I personally love it! lol  

Answer 3

It should be rests not rest.

I don't think it makes much sense. I mean, you give evidence of how the butterfly is strong and none of how the flower is strong.