What do you think of my poetry collection?

Question

These are the poems that I have written in the last three weeks. Are they good? ( And forgive me, I'm only 16 and English is not my first language).

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Answer 1

I don't think of your poetry collection....at all.

But i agree with the other two, you have a natural flow and your rhymes and structure is rather impressive considering english is not your first language. You express emotion well with your choise of words.....i encourage you to keep writing and developing your talent more.

Answer 2

You have got something special and magical about your writings which could take someone to a far off place, but you lack a certain depth or wisdom.

You may be young?

Maybe you will write better as you grow a little, but you do have a gift of magical dreamy writing.